Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Friday, April 20, 2012

Lung Love Limericks

You started off thinking it cool
But ended up looking the fool
Your lungs have turned black
Your clothes reek; you hack
Should have listened to those films at school!


You think that it's too hard to quit
You say you don't have enough grit
But try to take Skoal
through your neck with a hole
It sure ain't that easy to spit!

submitted for Lung Love Rhyme Contest at Rachel Hoyt's Rhyme Me A Smile


Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene) said...

This is a very helpful piece with artistry of word in calling attention to a malady that requires every means of attention

Good piece, Mouse

Gracias mi amiga

Brian Miller said...

ugh...ewww...but so nicely done mouse...yeah, not cool

JustRex said...

Yeah yeah yeah......


Ya rotten thing......!

Rachel Hoyt said...

These are awesome, Lolamouse! Thank you for participating in the contest. :) :)