I went with you to the practice room
watched you play piano
Your fingers hit the keys
and another pin fell into place
in the lock deep inside me
Your style was not graceful
You didn't coax music from the instrument
so much as expect it
Yours were hands
not to be trifled with
I wanted those hands to unlock
the music I thought had died
I wanted those hands to make me sing
in the key of ecstasy.
submitted for Thursday Think Tank, #92 Key, at Poets United
Beautiful...love the imagery in this. Tastefully done.
Wow! Who are you? That was quite erotic. This is quite some mise droppings you've laid.
oo la la now that is some kind of music...and the hands to demand it...smiles...
So you like piano players, eh? I can kind of...sort of...play a little bit of Yankee Doodle Dandy. Pretty impressive, huh?
HOT! So much, both inferred and said, and great pacing to boot.
I, too, notice a man's hands. One of the first things I admired about my one true love.
are you a singer? nothing like being a singer and really singing your accompanist a love song....
Even if the style is not graceful, I hope that it will inspire a love song. (I myself almost wrote a poem about always singing off key, but singing nonetheless.)
Talk about "music appreciation"!
Wonderful, Lola. Love this:
"and another pin fell into place
in the lock deep inside me"
Perfect photo, perfect word choices. Excellent.
I like the key of ecstasy...very sensual write ~
I think you were clever! It is tasteful yet flirty and fun~
I love the pace and the way you guided us. ;D
That was a beautifully written piece. Loved it!! =)
This is a very powerful expression of love. I really enjoyed it.
I like the mixed metaphors. Nice working of the sensual with the tangible lock and key. Really good.
Beautiful and steamy!
Ah, me. I fell briefly in love with a piano player once. They are fascinating sexy beasts aren't they?
Nice, sensual metaphor. I like where you went with that key.
Nice use of the key word. An enjoyable read. Thanks for it.
Very sexy miss mouse. I confess, i do find the hands of musicians (and artists) to be very ..attractive
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