Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Monday, March 21, 2011

Drink Up!

Raspberry Cosmopolitan
 Sweet Alcoholic Treat
Pinkly Delicious
Fruity Cold 
Its Glass
Thin Finger
Beckoning "Come"

Submitted for Experimenting With Poetry Forms, Week 11, Shape Poetry



Reflections said...

Interesting piece... those drinks do beckon at times, don't they.

Uma Anandane said...

Cheers! I'm joining you in ..Love the idea.Thanks for a wonderful drink ,friend ;)

Dr. McCoy said...

I was gonna lay off the booze today, but NOW I want a raspberry cosmo. Thanks.

Christine said...

Love the look of that poem, I didn't see it at first. I guess I was too wrapped up in the delicious words.

Rachel Hoyt said...

Hehehe. I LOVE the "finger beconing" at the end. I almost always hold my martini glasses like that when I get one because it's more fun! :)

tana... said...

huh...way to make a cold, damp, sleet-filled day a bit more bearable, just a bit, especially if I actually had one of those cosmos. :)