Thursday, March 10, 2011
POETRY BUS! THE CHALLENGE IS JUST THE BEGINNING!So here you go folks. Despite Eejit's panic that we might have forgotten that we were driving this week, (we remembered all along honest), here we are. Your challenge, should you choose to accept it it thus.
2: IN A FOUR LINE POEM
3: WITH A RHYME THAT HAS A RHYTHM SUCH AS THUS;
dum dum dunm dum dum dee dum
dum de dum de dum dee dum
dum de dum de dum dee dee
dum de dum de dum de dee.
So, here is my effort:
Marriage is more than religious
It grants status quite litigious
Legalize knots that are tied
From groom to groom and bride to bride!
I'm with you on this one .... !!!!!
I left a comment, it was a great one, but my interweb crashed! It basically said this was perfect and very good :-)
I'm not big on marriage, but I agree, everyone should have the choice.
Thanks so much! This was quite the challenge but fun!
Great rhyme - litigious and religious!!
litigious! love you four liner it couldn't be finer ! thanks
Yep, much impressed with the religious/litigious rhyme.
Good one lolamouse, itigious and religious brill connection of words.
I agree with Peter, love the litigious and religious rhymn :) Great poem & cause.
Heeheehee. Very clever, Lola Mouse!
Marriage is a knotty business!
Nice rhymes too!
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