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The ghosts are not speaking
If you could see them
(which you can not)
you would see them sitting
(perhaps hovering is a more correct descriptor)
on wrought iron benches
back to back.
You would also notice
their crossed arms,
noses and chins pointed skyward with
righteous indignation.
These ghosts carry a grudge like
others carried the ball and chain.
They have been bickering since 1897
The dead ignore them
The living are oblivious unless
they stir up too much of a fuss
upset a flower pot or
scare a horse
Most days, however, are spent in
quiet and purposeful disregard.
Neither actually remembers
the slight
but each ghost knows in her restless soul
that the other is at fault
and that it had something to do with
evening gowns
hurricanes
and lemon chess pie.
So, the ghosts are not speaking
but if you could see them
(which you can not)
you would see
at the corner of each one's mouth
a very
slight
grin.
submitted for Red Writing Hood #61 at Write on Edge
11 comments:
Way to put life into fog... What's lemon chess pie?
That was great. I could see them perfectly in my mind even if in my eyes, I could not.
haha what a fanciful ghost tale...i know it was the lemon chess cake too...dang it...
ha what a a fanciful ghost story...i knew it was the lemon chess cake...dang it...really nice write...
Uh huh, they're getting something out of it or they wouldn't do it so enthusiastically!
the fog will smell sweet as lemon pie, after reading this one
Love it. Thankyou
Beautiful! And so fitting for the prompt.
Oh my! I LOVE!
Especially the ending:
"but each ghost knows in her restless soul
that the other is at fault"
"at the corner of each one's mouth
a very
slight
grin."
Seems like they are two good friends underneath all that enmity and will happily argue for the rest of eternity~
I absolutely love this! It's lyrical and fun. What's better than a bunch of annoyed spooks?! Not much, I'd say. Nice take on the prompt, very unique!
This is fantastic! Just reading the title gave me goose bumps and it was such a great read! I could see them too, even though I can't!
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