|image courtesy of Lauren Randolph|
Girl with red shoes and green balloon
Saw you steal it from birthday party as you walked by fence
You also stole my heart
Please meet me for stale birthday cake
Friday, 8 p.m.
To return heart
Or give me yours in exchange
It only seems fair
Reply: Boy with white sneakers
The above is my first attempt at a Flash 55.
submitted for One Shot Wednesday, Week 41 at One Stop Poetry
What a unique way to look into a boy's mind!
She'll have to think about it...
Yes! Boy with white sneakers will surely jump at the opportunity. If not, the boy with white sneakers and the girl with red shoes will both be feeling blue...isn't that patriotic? Not sure what flash 55 is but you did a good job on this.
your poems are simply wonderful...i have read others on your blog and i love the humor...your poem for today is clever and brilliant...and i still can't get over 'mouse droppings'...you are truly talented and i look forward to reading every poem you post...thanks for making me smile!!!
janice-thank you so much! glad you're enjoying the blog!
ha. too cute. big smiles.
Oh how cute. Love the unique direction you went with this one. Love it!
interesting write, I enjoy the approach you took to this...I don't know what Flash 55 is either.
I liked this!
finding dreams for you
Nicely done! A cute tale.
How clever and fun this is! I love the perspective of doing this like an ad notice. Good one!
Cake, did someone say cake? Even stale -- I'm crashing that hopeful date party!!
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