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| image courtesy of Magpie Tales |
Artemis's playmate
She lives to shed her bindings
and run with the wild horses,
catch dandelion seeds
in her thick mane
Her love is fierce, feral
Do not try to tame her, for
she will fade away
like the brightest star
in the morning light.
submitted for Magpie Tales, 75
and Poetry Potluck Week 45: Nature and Life, at Jingle Poetry
21 comments:
well, she sure sounds like a ball of fun...smiles.
beautiful her,
lovely magpie.
Love the image and love your response to it! I'm so tempted to write something, but need to keep focused! But well done my girl!
Stunning imagery... this daughter of the wild. Wonderful write.
Ah, once upon a time . . . . .
Whatever happened to the wild child days?
Wonderful. So many images of youth and strength and freedom.
—Kay, Alberta, Canada
..graceful line and a poem at its best... like the line 'bout dandelions and the incorporation of some mythological figure... always a first love for me.. thanks for the read!(:
Brightest blessings!(:
~kelvin
This certainly captures the spirit of the image.
I can honestly say that I loved every line of this - and that is rare indeed. Thank you.
Guess many a wild child fades...
A tribute to fierce, feral love. Well done.
What a delightful read!
I want to be her..where can I sign up for lessons?
Perfectly rendered ...
amazing story on her.
Thanks for joining poetry potluck,
Cheers!
Sweet capture of the visual picture into your poem.Liked it
Long may her wilderness live!
Awwwwww - love this - 'abd run with the wild horses' great line
Excellent take on the prompt. I really loved this!
Love this.
You are from Alice in Wonderland ?
Tigerbrite
Could be hard to handle!
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