Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Wednesday, March 7, 2012


image by Sarolta Ban
 You're a little, little man
Trying to play me for the fool
Did you think you had a plan?
What an idiot you are!
Just a worthless, paltry pissant, and an
utter trifling tool.

You're an itty bitty boy
And I really hate your hat
Try to treat me like a toy?
See what happens to you now
Go away and don't annoy
me anymore you rotten rat!

You're a small pathetic loser
and a parasitic tick
You know that it's all true, sir
I am looking down at you
Come on, face me, your accuser
Jeez, you really make me sick!

submitted for The Mag, Mag 107


Pearl said...

Go get 'em, Tiger!!



Brian Miller said...

nice cadence to this...and sounds like he deserves it...

Fireblossom said...

Laffin my ass off that you dissed his hat!

JustRex said...


And it was such a nice hat.

ds said...

Wow. Get off the fence and show us how you/she really feel(s). ; ) Excellent stuff. Thank you.

Rachel Hoyt said...

LOVE the sassiness in this!!! :) I can't decide if I like "paltry pissant" or "utter trifling tool" better. :) Awesome that you insulted his hat.

Bryan White said...

"I really hate your hat"?

You tell him. Hee hee.