Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Saturday, February 26, 2011

Life's Dance

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Winter bows to spring
Snow melts to nourish new growth
Old becomes young

So too you and I
Memories in Life's dance, yet
Love is eternal
submitted for Haiku Challenge, Day 27


Dave from the "male" room said...

I know a certain hormonally challenged woman who gets younger when spring arrives!!

Mike Patrick said...

A lovely balance between the seasons and love. Both eternal.

Anonymous said...

I love your double haiku, Lolamouse. Love is eternal.

Sarah malik said...

I love winters but yet i accept the fact that springs are delightful :)
very beautifully penned !


Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene) said...

What to me, Spring brings
a breath of fresh air
a feeling to do my thing

I put down my Iphone
my cyber toys
play outside
like a little boy

Want to appreciate
the beauty of real
sight of butterfly wings,
scurrying terrestrials

this to me is
what Spring brings

Anonymous said...

"... Snow melts to nourish new growth
Old becomes young ..."

Enjoyed the string of imagery this projects ... Life's dance at times is a mystery of circles. Thank you ... becca

Cloaked Monk said...

Life's dance, New growth from death, circle of life...I was struck how well today's word goes with yesterday's image.

Lovely haiku set.

Anonymous said...

real love is eternal :)

Anonymous said...


let love last...

come join us.

Someone is Special said...

Love is eternal.. Well said Lolamouse..

Someone is Special