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Break me down to make me whole
Stand back and admire your skill
Creator, master of control
Break me down to make me whole
Revealing secrets of my soul
My life essence you distill
Break me down to make me whole
Stand back and admire your skill.
submitted for Friday Poetically at One Stop Poetry
9 comments:
nice...love the repitition...and if you read deeper into chuck's bio, he grids off his pics and works one grid at a time which makes what he comes up with all the more amazing...
of course it makes a great metaphor as well...
there is truth in your words.. sometimes there needs to be a breaking down before the building up again
Breaking down, building up. It really is a repetitive process. Well done!
When you are in the presence of genius you get a little dismantled every time. Sometimes it's a little painful coming back together.
break me down to make me whole... a painful gift to be treasured.
break me down and build me up. that's when art is at it's best. great poem
This is so good. His work is so metaphorical, isn't it?
I have broken many times, only to have the glue that puts me together make me stronger than before. Great poem!
Hot dogs and doughnuts? Where is Freud when you need him?!?
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