Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Monday, May 2, 2011


Take my advice
I'm never wrong
You won't regret it
It's yours for a song

Take my advice
I know about stuff
The counsel I give you
Is not off the cuff

Take my advice
I've been there, I know
Follow my guidance
I'll save you some woe

Take my advice
There's no better, you see
Because I like you, kid
I'll give it for free!

Take my advice
Go on and flaunt it
I know you can use it
'Cause I sure don't want it!
submitted for May Poetry Challenge at Verse in a Nutshell,  May 2, Advice


verseinanutshell said...

I love it! Well-penned

Fireblossom said...

I'm bowled over by such generosity!


✌Rabbit said...

"Advice is a form of nostalgia. Dispensing it is a way of fishing the past from the disposal, wiping it off, painting over the ugly parts and recycling it for more than it’s worth."

trisha said...

good one. its funny and cute. :)