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| image from Haiku Challenge |
A chance to chat with my thoughts
I rouse them from sleep.
Bleary eyed, foggy
Stretching, yawning, blinking wake
Spurning inertia.
I greet them warmly
Like old ladies over tea
And take pen in hand.
written for Haiku Challenge, Day 15
12 comments:
Wonderful! I love the three haiku--so descriptive of a solitary feeling.
I like "old ladies over tea' just beautiful, you have a way with words, awesome!!! :)
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/h-ku-15-solitude/
I really love your middle Haiku. Perfect, I love the idea of spurning inertia!
You have a wonderful relationship with solitude. Lovely.
You do haiku very well! Love the images you use for your solitary thoughts. :)
this is hilarious! Just adored it. :)
what a warm welcome to your thoughts and solitude.
awesome! Its so sad but a truth beautifully presented...I loved this one a lot ,really...its so tangible and touching :)
sarah
beautiful
This is great - thank you for penning such a wonderfully scripted piece.
http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/closed-to-the-divine/
old ladies over tea,
wow, amazing imagery, lovely sets of Haikus.
cheers.
Loved you take for solitude.. Thanks for this and Haiku poem came out very well..
Someone is Special
"A chance to chat with thoughts"...
Loved the haikus.. :)
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