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powerful love piece.Cheers.
This reminds me: I forgot to get my husband a Valentines Day card...oops...think I'll just copy your Haiku on a post-it for him :)It's terrific, really quite terrific!
very true, wise, beautiful and warm.trishahttp://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/14/love/
ecstasy, ashes...nice use of words as it should be in a haiku. Love is powerful indeed! :)sarah
Reminds me too much is too bad :) might end up in a heap destroyed in ruins!! Thank you for that wonderful share.
Phew!!!! I'm sweating after this. Excuse me, I'll be back in a 'phew'! How can just a 'phew' words get the juices flowing?
I'll focus on the ecstasy. We all end as ashes soon enough.
Oohhh.... HOT stuff, Lola!! Deliciously sensuous! Got goosebumps reading this one... teeheehee.. (winks)
ouch!!!! you lost me at ashes lol, like a twist of the knife...but nice, I like twisted lolhttp://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/h-ku-15-solitude/
really powerful haiku...ecstasy and then ashes...nice :)
ectasy ashes.. Wow. I loved it..Someone is Special
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