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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Thursday, February 24, 2011

Word!



Point sharp, damage done
You been told, slammed, take that - word!
Sticks and stones, you wish!

submitted for Haiku Challenge, Day 24

4 comments:

Mike Patrick said...

Angry haikus should make your words sit up and take notice. Wonderful.

beccagivens said...

Stick and Stones - Ouch!! I have found I have been able to put some balm on past "sticks and stones" through this very challenge of Haiku ... much soothed in the month of Love! :-)

Sharp Haiku - in EVERY sense of the word. ;-) Well done ~becca~

lynnaima said...

I like the intro, nice!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/25/h-ku-25/

Someone is Special said...

Sticks and Stones? You wish.. Hmmm Nice one ..


Someone is Special