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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Sparkle

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Scintillating skin
Sweat droplets sparkle like jewels
Wrap me in your heat

submitted for Haiku Challenge, Day 23

9 comments:

lynnaima said...

you make sweat sound "sexy" niceeeeeeeeeeeee! :)

trisha said...

this is fantastic. very gorgeously written. your link in SIS's blog is not working, will you please re-enter it or have done that already?

trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/scintillate/

Lolamouse said...

Trisha,
Thanks! Don't know what happened, but I resubmitted it.

Cloaked Monk said...

Nice and sensual take! Lovely.

Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/23/temptation/

beccagivens said...

Yikes ... :-) Thank you for sharing, becca

http://beccagivens.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/dark-velvety-sky/

Mike Patrick said...

Wow! That haiku may have opened up a bunch of links.

Jingle said...

lovely...



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Kristen Haskell said...

Oh I just love this! So Romantic

Someone is Special said...

Too romantic.. Loved it.. I invite you to write for room for romance as well..

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