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Sweet nothings whispered in my ear
Are nothing more than air
And declarations of devotion
Feel just like a prayer
Words
Won’t get me there
Don’t
Get on your knees for me
Your touch can tease, can please, so please
Give me a love that’s bold
And take me,
break me, make me love
With passion uncontrolled.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, FB Goes Old School
18 comments:
oOooo, lookit you, Mighty Ms. Mouse! This smolders. Thanks so much for taking on my challenge!
Now that's a Valentine a girl can live with! Nicely done, and great shoes, too.
Oh, I love that last stanza especially....hot stuff! You rocked the form with BOLDNESS.
Nicely done.
(Where can I get some of those shoes?)
Certainly nothing old school about this gem! Sizzlin' Hot!
whew....very nice....a love that is bold indeed...and with passion like that you can not go wrong...smiles.
Steamy....love it!!
I see Valentine's Day is over and it's back to business!
Loved it :-)
Love this one. Sexy and powerful
Great for Valentine's day, eh? LOL
Oh Lola, you've exposed your self. Well done, mi Amiga.
yowza! i love your poem, not so much the "shoes," heh. aslo rawr! ;)
Couldn't tear my eyes away from the image ... THEN I read your poem and forgot the image. Now, I'm left with the image of your words!
A wonderfully rhythmic love poem. Bravo!
I Am Woman, Hear Me Roar! Kudos, kiddo......this totally rocks. AND you wrote perfectly to form. So well done.
Oh my god! That was hot! That was exactly what any woman would want! I really believe that mushy romance is "nothing". It's the uncontrolled passion. :) Absolutely brilliant! I Love it!!!
Passion in poetry... oh, so effectively.
Really good! It would make great song lyrics...
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