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| Eternal Love Locks, Pont de l’Archevêché, photo by Susan |
Forgiveness is a part of
Love
Pushing through after the mistakes-
A branch breaks
In time, corrects the wrong
And still grows strong
You and I will always belong
Together, like autumn and spring
Whatever the fates may bring
love: a branch breaks and still grows strong.
16 comments:
On first reading your poem with my photo, I immediately thought of the English idiom "water under the bridge"--but that speaks to something not fixable which has passed into oblivion anyway, not a branch that "corrects the wrong." So I do not get the connection, but enjoy your poem on love anyway as it affirms the ruggedness of love and the necessity of forgiveness. Long Live Love!
smiles..we are human...and we will make mistakes...and love fills in those gaps as well...forgiveness is a part of it for sure...
a beautiful truth
Love endures much...
Learning from all those breaks does help love grow strong!
The pushing through ... so hard. So worth it.
if we can't forgive, how can we call it love
journey with a new friend
Such truth in this. I concur, knowing that the disagreements we had and the challenges The Good Husband and I tackled together created a strength theretofore nonexistent.
Truth in words...nicely done!
do like how you repeated that line... committed love so cool
I love the way your ending came together.
I love the metaphor of autumn and spring, and the branch breaking but is still strong ~ I think all couples undergo this one, and yes forgiveness is part of it ~
I love everything about this piece. The photo, the font, the repetition...
Eloquent
I love this Lolamouse! YOU really made me smile and ponder! We all have a branch break from time to time~ Beautiful!
Happy <3 Day to you~
Making it through the good and bad...staying strong. that is love..beautiful
trees are persistent, patient, slowly powerful =)
Nice extended metaphor.
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