|Eve and Lilith by favoritecolour|
You can tempt me with the core
Cause once I've had a taste of you
You leave me wanting more
I swallow down a mouthful
While most spit out the seeds
Your forked tongue beside my ear
Bespeaks most evil deeds
When I hear the hell hounds howl
I dress myself in night
I climb into your bed while
Their dark eyes glow like whores' lights
You can tempt me with the bones
Or with the blood or with the skin
Cause it don't take much tempting
For this wicked child to sin.
submitted for Fireblossom Friday, The Devil, You Say! at Imaginary Garden With Real Toads
Naught, naughty, naughty. LOL
Really enjoyed this...
'Cause it don't take much tempting
For this wicked child to sin'
Made me smile ...
Oh, this is wicked good!
Whoa, that's a crazy picture!
"Cause it don't take much tempting
For this wicked child to sin." ... Ha!
This is very funny; great rhythm.
Love it..devilishly wicked!
I loved this! it made me smile. This was a wonderful poem to read aloud......and sometimes it is 'fun' to fantasize being truly wicked, isn't it?
Fun time in the Garden of forked tongues and sin. My your Eve is a naughty child!
Oooo, this is a way cool response to the challenge. Loved it.
Oh this is just excellent! Your meter and rhyme create a chant-like effect, and the tone of the speaker is very daring. Both opening and closing stanzas were so strong, with the repetition.
It doesn't take all that much to lead me astray, either!
You wrote this so well. Love the rhythm and meter of it......and the last stanza really brings it home......
I have read this, but cannot believe it. I have always pictured you with a glowing halo, albeit one held up by horns. ;-)
Woohoo! I love it. No timid mouse, this one!
what a tempting and delicious write ~
Very neat take on the prompt. Well done!
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