tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post8064005196696113426..comments2023-10-28T07:14:53.152-04:00Comments on Mouse Droppings: WickedLolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-63885677907125253882012-07-25T16:31:46.637-04:002012-07-25T16:31:46.637-04:00Smoldering hot...Smoldering hot...Pat Tilletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17699973774273291205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-63531689491346156942012-07-23T23:32:31.951-04:002012-07-23T23:32:31.951-04:00Very neat take on the prompt. Well done!Very neat take on the prompt. Well done!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-7055662198030092802012-07-22T09:24:59.974-04:002012-07-22T09:24:59.974-04:00what a tempting and delicious write ~what a tempting and delicious write ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-10767549057978766382012-07-21T21:16:07.880-04:002012-07-21T21:16:07.880-04:00Woohoo! I love it. No timid mouse, this one!Woohoo! I love it. No timid mouse, this one!J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-48017164005248532042012-07-21T19:34:30.351-04:002012-07-21T19:34:30.351-04:00I have read this, but cannot believe it. I have al...I have read this, but cannot believe it. I have always pictured you with a glowing halo, albeit one held up by horns. ;-)Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-83991011127123371302012-07-21T18:16:39.688-04:002012-07-21T18:16:39.688-04:00You wrote this so well. Love the rhythm and meter ...You wrote this so well. Love the rhythm and meter of it......and the last stanza really brings it home......Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-65298113617143154982012-07-21T06:28:17.895-04:002012-07-21T06:28:17.895-04:00It doesn't take all that much to lead me astra...It doesn't take all that much to lead me astray, either!JustRexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00389126268262607714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-21985946677644345732012-07-21T02:37:13.510-04:002012-07-21T02:37:13.510-04:00Oh this is just excellent! Your meter and rhyme cr...Oh this is just excellent! Your meter and rhyme create a chant-like effect, and the tone of the speaker is very daring. Both opening and closing stanzas were so strong, with the repetition.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-75816840950996120302012-07-21T02:24:41.995-04:002012-07-21T02:24:41.995-04:00Oooo, this is a way cool response to the challenge...Oooo, this is a way cool response to the challenge. Loved it.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-46757480234208331752012-07-21T01:30:58.157-04:002012-07-21T01:30:58.157-04:00Fun time in the Garden of forked tongues and sin. ...Fun time in the Garden of forked tongues and sin. My your Eve is a naughty child!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-78839643930204862922012-07-20T23:34:19.858-04:002012-07-20T23:34:19.858-04:00I loved this! it made me smile. This was a wonde...I loved this! it made me smile. This was a wonderful poem to read aloud......and sometimes it is 'fun' to fantasize being truly wicked, isn't it?Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-52284533855374382462012-07-20T23:04:13.262-04:002012-07-20T23:04:13.262-04:00Love it..devilishly wicked!Love it..devilishly wicked!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-15458736086810406802012-07-20T23:02:06.390-04:002012-07-20T23:02:06.390-04:00Whoa, that's a crazy picture!
"Cause it ...Whoa, that's a crazy picture!<br /><br />"Cause it don't take much tempting<br />For this wicked child to sin." ... Ha!<br /><br />This is very funny; great rhythm.<br /><br />flipsiderecords.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-24345706856661011682012-07-20T22:44:48.715-04:002012-07-20T22:44:48.715-04:00Oh, this is wicked good!Oh, this is wicked good!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3907193349185074114.post-32663004825327989352012-07-20T21:55:41.817-04:002012-07-20T21:55:41.817-04:00Naught, naughty, naughty. LOL
Really enjoyed this...Naught, naughty, naughty. LOL<br />Really enjoyed this... <br />'Cause it don't take much tempting<br />For this wicked child to sin'<br />Made me smile ...Daydreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04139175719967937843noreply@blogger.com