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| Piano Man by LostMyFangs |
I imagined your hands coaxing song from my skin as from the keys
Twenty years, harmony's strong, and your hands yet entice song.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Sunday Challenge, Sijo
19 comments:
Music seduced the savage Mouse?
" I imagined your hands coaxing song from my skin as from the keys."
Now that's good!
Nice work here, LM. I like the feel, like smoky barroom piano, putting you in the mood. (Love your tags--I didn't exactly glide through this one either--in fact I just gave up completely on my first one after hours of hair pulling and started over.)
similar reason to why i married a dancer...i mean...ha, good with hands is always a good thing right? nice that it still after 20 years too..smiles.
Very sexy piece!
MmmmHmmm. This is so lovely... I hope you read this to your man!
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! "your hands yet entice song". Enticing, indeed.
How lovely! Your metaphor is very strong and this must reach every reader on a personal level. So glad you joined us in the RT mini-challenge.
So Romantic...you seduced me with piano.
yum! love this one!
i especially love that you left the lines long... the lines evoke the keys of the piano, or your limbs, maybe :)
I've always imagined what it would be like to play a woman like a musical instrument. To cradle her neck in the hollow of my shoulder and ply her strings... to pluck and strum and bow to a crescendo.
Alas, all of the music is in my soul and none of it reaches my fingers.
A warm and loving use of this poetic form, beautifully done.
K
I like that even after 20 years, the harmony is strong ~
Virtuoso performance?
Oh, this is just beautiful!! And oh so sensual.
Erotic and powerful - good job, Mosk
There's some beautiful heat to this one!! Well written, indeed...
"dark fingers plying ivory" love the word sound bump with plying ivory!
i've always heard musicians are excellent, sensitive lovers... {grin}
♥
wonderfully romantic
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