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| © Teresa Perin |
Watching the October sunsets
Waltzing under autumn sky
You and I
Green leaves rust, turn to dust
Let the summer die
Summer's new, searing yellow
Autumn's rich, mellow.
Disregarding rain and puddles
We stay warm despite the cold
Let's grow old
Storms will blow, come and go
As our story's told
We'll keep dancing, never rend
As we dip and bend.
20 comments:
Oh, to dip and bend so... Nice job with this form. It was all I could do to write one!
you keep dancing and i imagine you wont have to worry about rending...you know...smiles.
I enoyed this piece. There are some great rhymes, and I really like the theme.
Really nice write. Enjoyed the rhythm here. Thanks
This brought me memories of walking in the rain with my hubby. Love the change of seasons
Yes, 'dip and bend' got me too. Nice descriptive work.
Your lines have a wonderful musical rhythm, which is difficult to attain with this form. Very smooth and beautiful descriptions.
A lovely poem, made me feel like waltzing :-)
Absolutely beautiful. Makes me feel more comfortable about growing old together.
Mouse, you combined all of these prompts with skill and great poetry.
This would be perfect if you could skip the growing old part.
How romantic..I like to keep dancing until I am old ~
Great form too ~
Beautiful poem and it would be so wonderful to dance until the end and never be torn apart. Hubby would just grab me when I was in the kitchen and we would start dancing and only stop when we would start laughing so much. Now due to knee problems we rarely do it.
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Thanks for such a wonderful stormy poem for this weeks Theme Thursday. May no one rend it. Have a great weekend.
God bless.
Your "storm" seems so gentle and romantic compared to what the US east coast has so recently witnessed.
The most lovely sort of dip and bend...
I miss summer already.
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If everything else is the storm, you describe the eye. Sure is nice to find this together place.
After experiencing the storm named Sandy, I welcome a positive attitude toward stormy weather.
Oh, yes! Some lovely little moves going on here!
Deep feeling with so much gentleness
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