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Endearing gestures
metastasize into traits
intolerable
Loving embraces become
stiff, suffocating
Complementary viewpoints
Irreconcilable split
submitted for Theme Thursday, Split
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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
12 comments:
Oh man! We've all been there. I think you've described it perfectly!
Oh gosh what a good one - short but very sharp, cutting even!
This is sad.. but lovely form. Glad you wrote this. I still have to internalize the form, and write one.
That pic is perfect for this ~
yikes...sounds like things gone sour...eek!
You nailed the form with some very pointed writing.
well put.
;)
Oh, that was suffocatingly painful. An excellent write! xoXox
I like it!
Oh, I can relate to this very well. Damn!
You evoked some strong feelings in this--I like it very much.
Wow! Who hasn't ever felt like that at one point in their life? Very well done! Peace :)
I am sad now. Well done.
strong words, powerful illustrations, your poetry rocks.
hope to see you at poetry picnic week 2 tonight,
week 2 theme: the kiss.
cheers.
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