Red Umbrella, Christopher Shay
Red umbrella blooms
hibiscus in the rain or
poisonous mushroom
You do not fear the wetness
thriving in these warm, damp pools
submitted for Magpie Tales 80
Red umbrella blooms
hibiscus in the rain or
poisonous mushroom
You do not fear the wetness
thriving in these warm, damp pools
submitted for Magpie Tales 80
17 comments:
Ahhh...I love how the red umbrella 'blooms'..........
yeah dont eat the mushrooms...you never know what you might see...cool take with the umbrella blooming...
Has a kind of Haiku feel to it.
lovely...
enjoy the rain.
Poisonous mushroom? That's a thought. I like the yin/yang thing going on here.
Interesting poem with more than one level.
Charming. I REALLY love this!
Red bloom that beams benignly or
Red mushroom that drips poison...
I loved the two contrasting reds of your poem!
So lovely! Are the photos that accompany your work also your own?
They are very pretty and you don't ever want to put your lips on them.
very clever thoughts.
beautiful magpie.
Beautiful! Especially the image of the poisonous mushroom :)
I like this. It flows beautifully.
I love the hibiscus/mushroom stuff. Very imaginative, Ms. Mouse!
Love it!
Great tanka, thanks.
Lovely stuff
Anna :o]
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