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My mind keeps replaying how it could have been
But then I count your breaths like I'm counting sheep
And pretty soon I'm smiling and I'm falling asleep
We're still here
We're still here, babe
They say a tree grows stronger in the broken parts
I guess that it's the same way with broken hearts
And though we've hurt each other some along the way
My love for you keeps getting stronger every day
And we're still here
We're still here, babe
And who would've thought that the boy from the band
Would fall for the girl who couldn't carry a tune
But now you've got me dancing under the stars
Singing silly love songs up to the moon
So now I don't care if the world stops spinning
'Cause I would still wake up in the morning grinning
I know that other loves may have come to an end
But I'm sticking with you because you're my best friend
Yes, we're still here
We're still here, babe
We're still here
We're still here, babe
Yeah, we're still here.
submitted for Jingle Poetry, Poetry Potluck 22: Love, Bonds and Relationships
submitted to Photograph Prose
submitted to Thursday Think Tank, #42 Love at Poets United
On 4/25/11 my husband and I celebrated our 18th anniversary! I am so thankful to have him in my life.
21 comments:
what a thoughtful and beautiful piece.
Thanks for the contribution,
you rock.
A++
Ah, I loved this! Reminded me of Sonny and Cher's "I've got you, babe". :) I'm so happy that you've found someone so special.
beautiful.. happy valentines.. here’s mine.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/05/11/happily-tied/
NICE BUT WITH A SENSE OF DEEP EMPATHY. I LOVE THIS ONE
Love, love, love!!!! Oh, did I mention that I loved it?
a beautiful piece...
love can keep us going on...
That was nice and enjoyed it too!! In places it is intense and then carefree and a bit of humor too...made a complete package!!
really nice love poem..Here are mine;
http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/goodbyes/
http://louisedouglas.wordpress.com/2011/02/13/to-my-love/
Ahh!! Best friends.. perfect for Valentine's day.. We are all still here with our friends...
Thank God for that...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-emptiness-and-soul.html
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Lyrical and lovely!
beatiful! just Beautiful!
When you love someone and you feel that person's love in return, for me, there's no happier contentment in life than that feeling of love.
Very nicely done.
Beautiful....enjoyed very much
what a beautiful piece! Thoughtful and lovely. xo
I could hear you singing ...
It could be a song!
Isabel and Ella: I had a tune in my head when I was writing it! Too bad I can't write music!
Sherry: Thank you so much!
Andy: I agree. Greatest feeling in the world!
Rashmi: Thank you so much! I enjoy your work as well.
Kim: Many thanks!
lunawitch: So glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting!
Awww so sweet and lovey dovey and just what love should be :) Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. And I love the repetition :)
This is simply beautiful... A love that stays and grows... and certainly survive with that sweet thanks in one's heart.. it is almost like a song.. the lyrics that melts all heart...
I love this, love this, love this! It's so sweet and romantic in a tear-jerking way! This will make a perfect love song!
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