Words unravel like cheap knit
Tangles on the page
written for Haiku Challenge, Day 17, Ravel
and Thursday Poets' Rally, Week 38
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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
11 comments:
Beautiful! I love the title and picture on your blog. Cute and funny!
well done.
welcome back to poets rally.
thanks, have fun!
let me know after you are done 18 commenting.
:)
Love it! I've started writing a few non-rhyming things at various times. It started well, but lost momentum. It unraveled. :)
My Poet's Rally post: Imbiciles Turn Criminal
I kept reading it for few times till I realized that it's a short one- the words are tangled indeed. The moment I reach the end, the beginning begins automatically!
Love xoxox
Just being thoughtful: http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2011/02/15/pigeonic-limerick/
great focus.. just in case you have not been, here's my week 38 haha! http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
My words unravel all the time, but they usually originate from my mouth. Interesting simile.
fantastic analogy with words and fabric! loved it xoxo
Please feel free to visit mine at: http://poetrybysherry.blogspot.com/2011/02/beach.html
Love it! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/02/here-today-and-maybe-melted-tomorrow.html
I also have a twitter, my username being MsMatsui. If you want, come follow me!
This is absolutely wonderful, and I like the name of your blog even more. :o) My goal is to some day be able to write such powerful poems with so few words.
cute picture, true words. awesome :D
describes my writing sometimes, or at least some of my more frustrated attempts!
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