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Homeless man sleeps on concrete
His blanket, the Sun
Snaky hair, don't look!
That yellowed newsprint, age or...?
Smell of sweat and beer
Rusted chain link fence
Claims paper stolen by wind
To join the debris
submitted for Haiku Challenge, Day 19
9 comments:
sad state indeed...living like this :(
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/h-ku-19-debris/
sad reality check.
well done.
The debris of the inner city. It is a shame we have human debris.
Sad condition! Touching topic for the prompt!
this was heart-breaking. well written poem.
trisha
http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/debris/
Thanks! I see this in my reveries and it's constant in my mind while dreaming as i sleep.
Wonderful! I love it. (Of course, I also tend towards issue statements.) Perfect.
Shalom,
http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/19/children/
fab - u - lous!
Nice Package of Haiku.. Thanks..
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