You are as deep as
my dog's water bowl
I looked into your eyes
and saw eye
No more.
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Lunch today with Mom
I had the Cobb salad
She ate my soul
Left a mess and
no tip
What a bitch.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Words Count with MZ, Twitter Poetry
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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
11 comments:
wow. love these two. the second one is a wow wow!
Ouch! These are tweets with claws!
That second one could not be more perfect. Love!
Brilliant tweets! Thought-provoking too.
Your mom and my mom should have lunch and see who wins. Of course, they'd probably be sweet as pie to an outsider!
Love them both--but the second one is one to which I can relate. You are really sharp and classy here, LM, even with claws on.
ha! ouch! ~
Miss Mouse please stay away from the Owl and the Pussycat-they are not your friends!
Purrfectly done
She ate my soul… Oh, that was a great one (hope she paid for the lunch!)
Ooh, Ms Mouse, you are very much the queen of the evil tweet. Good for you!
K
lol....a mum lunch to avoid - if she lets ya!
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