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| Mandala Heart by Judy's Creative Doodling |
I want to know what’s real, please take me there
Believe the things I feel, please take me there
Been taken from, now too afraid to share
My scars have yet to heal, please take me there
The lies I've heard, the truth just seems one too
Forgotten how to care, please take me there
A labyrinthine maze I can’t escape
Forgotten how to care, please take me there
A labyrinthine maze I can’t escape
The end you won’t reveal, please take me there
So tired of grasping for what I can’t see
From running on the wheel, please take me there
Naked and scared; I’ve nothing left to bare
And nothing to conceal, please take me there
I want to see Heaven before I die
I give you my appeal, please take me there
I need to know the whole of love, not crumbs
A mouse could find and steal, please take me there.
written for (late per usual!) for dVerse Poets Pub, Form For All, Ghazals and Ghazal Sonnet
submitted for dVerse Poets Pub, Open Link Night 82
submitted for dVerse Poets Pub, Open Link Night 82
3 comments:
I like what you did with that difficult ghazal form, including the mousey allusion in the final stanza.
i need to know the whole of love....not just crumbs...you cant subsist on crumbs...that is for sure...in food or love....really nice use of the form....
What a lovely ghazal sonnet ~
I love the repetition, please take me there ~ The ending couplet is very good, with your signature name ~
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