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Tempt me
You never know
the things I will
do
the places I will
go
if you tempt me
just so
Paint ice hot flames
around our bed
Dare me
to enter
with a silent stare
and a guilty smile
Play me
slow smoky jazz sounds
with your eyes
Write me poems
with your tongue
down my neck
to the small of my back
and dot the 'i' s
with frost covered cherry blossoms
Tempt me
Master all of my senses
Take them from me
I confess
I am no innocent
Use me
I am your canvas
I am your book
Bind me well
Keep me
tempted.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Fireblossom Fridays, Temptation
Poetry Jam, Hot and Cold
Poets United, Vice Versa, Midnight Snack #5 (Sound/Silence; Guilt/Innocence)
dVerse Poets Pub, dVerse Poetics, Meeting the Bar, A Martian Sharpens His Knife
26 comments:
oh la la... you sure had me with the slow smoky jazz sounds and writing poems with the tongue on the neck....hmmmm...nice and hot
That's a book anyone would like to read...
Well now! I love the stanza about writing you poems with their tongue! I'm so glad you are part of FBF! Don't forget to sign the linky so everyone can come see. :-)
OO-wee! This was great and a real step out of what I expect from you. Congrats! Fantastic!
Very erotic. I loved it.
Very sultry, with an amazing picture to match.
This is very cool, LM--or rather, hot. ;_) Lots of delicious and sensuous imagery in our recipe for temptation--who could resist?
Wow! I need a long cold shower.
Oh, I see! Now you have Haiku Cat up. This is getting serious, LOL!
write poems with your tongue down my neck...that is hot!!!! smoking write ma'am
Whew hot write... I think you are getting better and better with your form and words ~ Love this ~
I can almost hear the smoky jazz sounds, and the thrum of the bass, in this sultry piece.
hawt! rawr!
This is very sensual and the metaphor of the lover's body as canvas, book, jazz improvisation, speaks on honest terms. "Take them from me." Demand, plea, command. The line between dominator/dominated is finely blurred, enlivening the erotic arousal and pleasure that seeks total abandonment.
HOT HOT HOT Miss mouse. Love it. Just brilliant
This is beautifully and sensually done, Lolamouse! It almost makes me want to be led into temptation. Smiles. And you chose the perfect picture!
Yes indeed, it's getting very warm in here.
I would like to echo Fireblossom's reference to the stanza about... write stanzas with your tongue...with an additional titillization that I can roll my rrrr's. You can fantacize about the poetry I could write in the small of your back :p .
Oooh, gives me the goose pumps.
yes the stanza about writing poems, that was supreme
This is lovely. I really like "Play me slow smoky jazz sounds with your eyes"!
K
What a wonderful sensual poem!
I am no innocent
Keep me tempted...
You little seductress you!
Love it...I am like Fireblossom..I like "writing poems with your tongue"
Absolutely gorgeous!
Shriek!
This is 'making me weak in the knees' poetry ....
awesome post!
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