Poems, Inspirations, Musings, and Other Shit
love mahogany as a descriptive color...can def see it and smell it...and the brittle bones...i see him now...
I like mahogany hands ~I am also in this challenge under my real name ~
This so fit the picture...old bones like try wood...love that line
Wonderful haiku. In good balance with the photo. Thank you.
Old bones like dry woodwhat an image you have created!! nice ~~
Yeah, well described!
Some say that eyes are the windows to the soul, but I think that hands, especially old ones, reveal much about the soul as well.To Paint This ImageTo Paint the Image
I saw lumber limbs as well--wonderfully written :)
Deeep! And such an apt description. Like it! :)
Your words paint the image perfectly.
Just gotta love haiku.A world of meaning in a few words.
live imagery, well done.
Living in the south I have seen hands exactly as you've described. I've wondered what those hands have been through. Beautifully written!
'Mahogany hands' & 'Old bones like dry wood' - Loved it so much.. :-) Thoughtful Haiku from your pen..Someone is Special
Haha, love the comparison, excellent!
Those ancient hands...mahogany was the perfect word!
I love me a good haiku. You make it look easy.
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