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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Monday, February 13, 2012

Bon Voyage!

 When we fell in love
We not only rocked the boat
We sank the whole ship!


Holding hands, we jumped
Our life boat was each other
And we rode the waves.

18 comments:

Susie Clevenger said...

Love comparing to jumping into waves without life jackets and weathering the storms that come

Heaven said...

That must have been some waves to sink the ship ~

Happy hearts day ~

Marian said...

if this baby's rockin'.... ah, never mind. i like this!

Fireblossom said...

You fell in love on an Italian cruise liner?

Asni said...

Hm ... very nice!

Kay L. Davies said...

Oh, hey, very nicely done. I love the analogy. Sink or swim, lovers do it together. Yes!
K

Teresa said...

What vivid imagery! It is a great comparison.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Sigh....lovely, I adore all the raining hearts. I am Too Old for romance any more - but you almost make me wish I wasnt. Hee hee. How do you do the raining hearts?????

Noble said...

lovely :)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

We sank the whole ship!...That's the power of love....Lovely haiku :)

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Phew! so glad you kept your head above water!
Happy Valentines Day!

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

One Titanic love, huh? Lovely!


Who Can Love the Frost?

Kerry O'Connor said...

How lovely, with your shower of hearts for the day.

darev2005 said...

I don't think we ever sank the ship
She's not crazy about water
But we did knock the headboard off once.
Does that count?

Amber said...

Amazing comparison! Too good! :)

Someone is Special said...

Loved your comparison! Damn Good!

becca givens said...

Sinking the ship -- really fell hard, huh!!?? :-)

Although I am late getting around today, Happy Valentine's Day!

Mrs.Trellis said...

Nicely nautical! :)