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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Thursday, February 23, 2012

Dream Walking


Synesthesia
Synesthesia by jaynecp on polyvore.com

In dream walks each night
    I see bird song, hear sun set
    Awaken and mourn

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 24 – February 24th – Words: Dream Walks Thanks to Rachana Shakyawar of Humming Today because the phrase 'Dream Walks' was coined from her poem

13 comments:

Grace said...

An interesting post, specially the last line ~

I do like the nature images on the second line ~

Fireblossom said...

Yes yes, I know this feeling.

Asni said...

The image is perfect for the haiku. Very nicely done.

Mama Zen said...

Really well done haiku!

Brian Miller said...

love the twist on the senses in the middle...and i would mourn as well...

vivinfrance said...

Everything is topsy turvey in dreams.

Chèvrefeuille said...

Well composed Lolamouse. Love the picture you're painting with your words. After the sweet dreams it's very rough to awaken. :-)

darev2005 said...

Some of my dreams, I'm glad to wake up. Some, not so much.

Pat Tillett said...

Very nice words and image!

sonsylass said...

How beautiful and poignant and cleverly written :-)

becca givens said...

Ahhhh, nice nice nice!! Great image to pair with it!! I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.

Blossom Vydrina said...

Synesthesia is fascinating and an excellent topic for "dream walks"
beautifully described and felt

Someone is Special said...

'Awaken and Mourn' Loved the haiku a lot particularly the last line.. :-)