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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Friday, February 24, 2012

Cult-ure

Come join us
We will give you love
and your thoughts

Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 25 – February 25th – Theme or Word: Cult Form: - Haiku 
(structure: 3-5-3) 

12 comments:

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

A beautiful haiku about Culture :) Loved your take :)


Humanity

Grace said...

The last line is powerful...brainwashing indeed ~

This is perfect ~

You are getting better and better dear ~

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Yes, you/they will! Ha! I am delighted with your take on the prompt!


Virgin’s cult

Fireblossom said...

You haiku cultists scare me.

Btw, I had to come back and read "Pretty Is" again this morning.

darev2005 said...

Oooo.... subtle. Very nice. It took me a minute to get it.

Kara said...

Ha! I love the ironic twist.

Kara said...

Ha! I love the ironic twist.

Brian Miller said...

haha...we will give you your thoughts...that is some scary stuff...

Ramesh Sood said...

Beautiful.. we will give you your thoughts... magnificently said..

beccagivens said...

Nicely done, lolamouse!! Took me a second to catch and your thoughts ... so that makes it cleverly penned. I also just noticed your frog in the side bar ... don't know why I hadn't noticed it before today. Happy Saturday!! Here is my Day 25.

cloakedmonk.com said...

Perfect!

Someone is Special said...

beautiful.. beautiful.. loved it..