When we fell in love
We not only rocked the boat
We sank the whole ship!
Holding hands, we jumped
Our life boat was each other
And we rode the waves.Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 14 – February 14th – Theme or Word: Love or Valentine
and Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Open Link Monday, Love Poems
18 comments:
Love comparing to jumping into waves without life jackets and weathering the storms that come
That must have been some waves to sink the ship ~
Happy hearts day ~
if this baby's rockin'.... ah, never mind. i like this!
You fell in love on an Italian cruise liner?
Hm ... very nice!
Oh, hey, very nicely done. I love the analogy. Sink or swim, lovers do it together. Yes!
K
What vivid imagery! It is a great comparison.
Sigh....lovely, I adore all the raining hearts. I am Too Old for romance any more - but you almost make me wish I wasnt. Hee hee. How do you do the raining hearts?????
lovely :)
We sank the whole ship!...That's the power of love....Lovely haiku :)
Phew! so glad you kept your head above water!
Happy Valentines Day!
One Titanic love, huh? Lovely!
Who Can Love the Frost?
How lovely, with your shower of hearts for the day.
I don't think we ever sank the ship
She's not crazy about water
But we did knock the headboard off once.
Does that count?
Amazing comparison! Too good! :)
Loved your comparison! Damn Good!
Sinking the ship -- really fell hard, huh!!?? :-)
Although I am late getting around today, Happy Valentine's Day!
Nicely nautical! :)
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