so much depends
upon
a pink lined dip
stick
drizzled with morning
urine
atop the white
sink.
submitted for Poetry Jam, "So Much Depends Upon... "
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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
13 comments:
Now that's the kind of thing the rest of your life can depend on! Nicely penned,
An homage to the Williams Carlos Williams poem, I take it. Nicely done.
oh snap...yes it does...
Yes! Brilliant! Pregnancy test!
Ah yes, indeed it DOES!! Smile
Tell this to our Republican friends. :)
I hope everyone catches the tribute at the bottom........
You're brilliant!
;)
Most definitely! Excellent. I really like this poem. Thanks for posting at PJ.
I love it! What a unique response to the prompt :)
This is awesome!....:-)
What a visual! Love this ...
All I can say is, wow! Crisp, clear and yet life changes in that moment forever!
omg - so true! and I love that you took WCW's form for your own. Very, very well done!
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