started out like any other day
She made the coffee
kissed the husband
sent the kids off to school
and then realized it was missing
At first she thought she had simply left it
with the car keys
but no
She searched under the newspaper
in her coat pockets
and sweater drawer
even in the trashcan
but it wasn't anywhere
She tried to remember the last time
she had seen it
It was some time between her wedding
and the last time she had finished a cup of tea
while it was still warm
"If I were a name, where would I be?"
she said to herself
then searched the dryer
and found three lost socks
but no name
She considered taking out an ad
but couldn't decide on an appropriate reward
for finding a name
or, for that matter, how she could be sure
she would recognize it as hers
and didn't want to take in the wrong one
After some thought
she decided she needed a new name
The old one probably didn't fit any way
She began her search for a name
right after she brewed a pot of tea
and finished an entire cup
while it was still warm.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Sunday Challenge-Featuring Ellen Wilson
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Sunday Challenge-Featuring Ellen Wilson
11 comments:
You really ARE Alice!
:)
xoxo
I think many ladies could identify with this! :)
Let's hope she gets inspired by something warm and comfy like Chamomile. How'd you like to come home from work and discover your wife had named herself "Constant Comment?"
smiles....very nice...to lose ones name...or one step further the identity is easy to do caught up in the day to day...in a metaphorical sense this makes a great story that i think several would relate to...
Great way to look at the lostness that can overtake us when we find ourselves in a situation that has changed around us, and changed us with it. I like the oblique angle you took, with no overt references--much more effective to show than say, and you have that down here. Good stuff, LM.
This says a lot about a woman's search for identity among all the roles she has to play out day by day.
I love this. I can relate. For years I thought my name was "Hey Mom"
This is just simply so beautiful! What an amazing idea!!! Brilliant!!!
Lola, I enjoyed your take on the prompt~
How our soul's essences gets lost among the stirrings of life~
Our identity continues to change, almost as much as all the choices of tea ;D
As someone who legally changed her name a decade ago, you know I like this!
this was me.
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