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| Synesthesia by jaynecp on polyvore.com |
In dream walks each night
I see bird song, hear sun set
Awaken and mourn
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 24 – February 24th – Words: Dream Walks Thanks to Rachana Shakyawar of Humming Today because the phrase 'Dream Walks' was coined from her poem
13 comments:
An interesting post, specially the last line ~
I do like the nature images on the second line ~
Yes yes, I know this feeling.
The image is perfect for the haiku. Very nicely done.
Really well done haiku!
love the twist on the senses in the middle...and i would mourn as well...
Everything is topsy turvey in dreams.
Well composed Lolamouse. Love the picture you're painting with your words. After the sweet dreams it's very rough to awaken. :-)
Some of my dreams, I'm glad to wake up. Some, not so much.
Very nice words and image!
How beautiful and poignant and cleverly written :-)
Ahhhh, nice nice nice!! Great image to pair with it!! I'm later than usual, however ... Here is my Day 24.
Synesthesia is fascinating and an excellent topic for "dream walks"
beautifully described and felt
'Awaken and Mourn' Loved the haiku a lot particularly the last line.. :-)
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