Come join us
We will give you love
and your thoughts
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 25 – February 25th – Theme or Word: Cult Form: - Haiku
(structure: 3-5-3)
We will give you love
and your thoughts
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 25 – February 25th – Theme or Word: Cult Form: - Haiku
(structure: 3-5-3)
12 comments:
A beautiful haiku about Culture :) Loved your take :)
Humanity
The last line is powerful...brainwashing indeed ~
This is perfect ~
You are getting better and better dear ~
Yes, you/they will! Ha! I am delighted with your take on the prompt!
Virgin’s cult
You haiku cultists scare me.
Btw, I had to come back and read "Pretty Is" again this morning.
Oooo.... subtle. Very nice. It took me a minute to get it.
Ha! I love the ironic twist.
Ha! I love the ironic twist.
haha...we will give you your thoughts...that is some scary stuff...
Beautiful.. we will give you your thoughts... magnificently said..
Nicely done, lolamouse!! Took me a second to catch and your thoughts ... so that makes it cleverly penned. I also just noticed your frog in the side bar ... don't know why I hadn't noticed it before today. Happy Saturday!! Here is my Day 25.
Perfect!
beautiful.. beautiful.. loved it..
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