underwater sculpture by Jason deCaires Taylor |
I will follow you anywhere
I always have
for the sun is warm
only as it reflects in your eyes
and the air fit to breath
only as it blows through your hair
Damn these breaths
I do not want them
I am half alive without you
and waiting on the shores of Acheron
with a mouth of gold
and a ferry schedule
Sweet Eurydice, follow me home
or if not,
I will be content
to stay forever with you
and I will never
look back.
12 comments:
Lovely take on this... I love the Eurydice angle and the references to Acheron.
Beautiful Magpie!
with a mouth of gold
and a ferry schedule
Sweet Eurydice, follow me home
or if not,
I will be content
to stay forever with you
and I will never
look back.
love that...in particular that mouth full of gold...
This is a real jewel of a poem. It ticks all the boxes. Fabulous.
beautiful, longing
"with a mouth of gold
and a ferry schedule"
Absolutely outstanding.
Love the title...that says it all.
wow! very catching :) keep it up! loved it
Chilling.
You just have to remember that there are some places they don't really want you to follow them to.
That was great and that picture goes with it so appropriately.
Beautiful love story...
Well written to the picture. Most inventive.
Really nice and full of longing...
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