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Baby Girl wear her butterfly wings for Halloween
She soar 'round the house pretending to fly
Baby Girl say, "I'ma fly for real one day!"
Baby Girl's Daddy laugh real loud. Say,
"You too precious to fly, Sugar
You Daddy's little doll
Fly too high,
you break
like a fine
china
plate."
Fly too high,
you break
like a fine
china
plate."
Baby Girl
pout her lips
and scrunch up her face
pout her lips
and scrunch up her face
Baby Girl go tell her Mama
"I'ma fly for real one day, Mama!"
"I'ma fly for real one day, Mama!"
Mama grin but look like she smell somethin' off
She say, "Don't be talking crazy. You too fat to fly
even if you had wings. Imagine, a butterball like you!"
Mama's words stung like steppin' ona nest a yella jackets
She say, "Don't be talking crazy. You too fat to fly
even if you had wings. Imagine, a butterball like you!"
Mama's words stung like steppin' ona nest a yella jackets
Baby Girl blink her eyes buncha times then but she don't cry
She be thinking'
She be schemin'
Baby Girl go 'bout her business but she always on the lookout
She be collectin' what she need for her potion:
first mornin' dewdrops
hurricane winds and
dragonfly wings
angel trumpet blooms
tears from a broken hearted girl and
stardust
silk from a spider's web
a sigh from the laziest afternoon in June
and in a glass cannin' jar, 'stead of pole beans,
the perfect note
from the love song
of a white throated sparra'
Take Baby Girl long time to collect everthing
But Baby Girl, she long on patience 'cause
You got to fix a potion jus' right and
But Baby Girl, she long on patience 'cause
You got to fix a potion jus' right and
Baby Girl, she wanna be jus' right
Then one clear summer night
when the moon be bright
and the sky be dark
as molasses
when the moon be bright
and the sky be dark
as molasses
Baby Girl
know.
know.
Next
morning
she be gone
morning
she be gone
Her Daddy don't say
nothin' but make tight fists
with his big hands. Her Mama
cry and cry. Say, "How could she
leave like this?" Slip a paper on Baby Girl's
pillow. It read, "You don't need wings to fly."
submitted for Magpie Tales, 70
nothin' but make tight fists
with his big hands. Her Mama
cry and cry. Say, "How could she
leave like this?" Slip a paper on Baby Girl's
pillow. It read, "You don't need wings to fly."
submitted for Magpie Tales, 70
18 comments:
THIS is BRILLIANT. I so love this poem, the look of it on the page, the rhythm, the way the words roll through my mind and most of all the story with its wonderful message at the end. A truly wonderful read.
You certainly don't.
This. Is. Tremendous.
I love this, and the voice in this.
So, are you back New Jerseydevil Land?
smiles. this is lovely storytelling...and inside i am sheering her for her wisdom and her freedom...
Beautifully shared... and no, you don;t need wings to fly... smiles.
This is really great. Great voice, look, language, theme. I want to use it in my classroom just cause it's awesome.
It Just Got Interesting
You dragged me in for sure, got all emotional about baby girl and horrible parents - then the killer line at the end - you don't need wings to fly - one of d best Magpie's ever in my humble opinion!
You caught me in your web. Wonderful silken web you weave.
A wonderful romp through a land I was loathe to leave.
Holy snap. That one doesn't just whack you in the head like a ball peen hammer. It chases you around the room and whacks you repeatedly like an angry mom with a flyswatter. That was freaking awesome!
Wonderful story! It makes me so sad when people tease their kids about being fat. Love the last line
How wonderful is this Magpie? Everyone knows the answer to that question ...........
Hey! Hey! OMG! This is absolutely fantastic! I'ma
gonna be rereading this one for a while to come!
Lolamouse, this is inspired! I love everything from the dialect to the arrangement to the story. You rock!
I really, really enjoyed reading this. Wonderful!
A sad tale...
Excellent! Most enjoyable.
A fantastic read. Incredibly imaginative.
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