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weaves a seamless blanket
Thoughts depart
like a passing breeze
I float,
a sylph
no longer tethered
to ground
Breathe in
Breathe out
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Words Count With MZ
and mindlovemisery, Prompt 5, Wordle Challenge
13 comments:
Oh wow this is gorgeous, how serene and elegant love it =)
As I read your poem .. my breathing slowed .. wonderful feeling! Thanks Mouse!!
Oh such a lovely lifting, reading your poem. Question: I wonder how they got the mouse on your sidebar to perch on top of that dandelion stalk????? he is adorable.
I have never been one for meditation but you make it sound very soothing indeed.
Safe and soothing, and I learned a new word. Thanks for that!
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!
How appealing this sounds..."thoughts depart" and "I float"...I would love to feel like that.
A sweet serenity here, Ms Mouse.
K
Perfect photo for your beautiful writing. To float away in your meditation. Ahhhh.
I can float in peace from reading this piece.
Oh, I really go for this!
Very restful place, LM. I'm afraid when I try it, I start immediately wondering if I turned off the coffeepot or something, but the world you project here has its own coherence and integrity.
The beauty of meditation is beautifully captured!
The new prompt is up =)
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