Them boys don’t know from beat-
I been beat up, beat down, beat in, and beat out
most all my life
Them boys don’t wanna love no woman;
they wanna make love to their mirrors
to themselves
They love each other;
woman gets fucked
Wanna hear some howlin’?
Listen to my late stage back alley abortion
Groove
to some volts of electricity jammed through my brain
to some volts of electricity jammed through my brain
Hear my fists beating
against the locked doors of mental
hospitals
I was born a woman
I live a woman
but I can die as good as any man.
This poem is inspired by the women of the Beat Generation.
submitted for Imaginary Garden With Real Toads, Let's Do the Time Warp Again, in which we are asked to write as someone from the year 1958.
14 comments:
Love it!
Wow! This is some potent stuff! the 50s seem to have been an age of liberation for many men, but women continued to suffer the worst forms of prejudice. Your last line is fabulous.
Ouch, I remember hearing horror stories, in the 60s, about "electro-shock therapy" being "better than a frontal lobotomy" which was a common surgical procedure prescribed for psychiatric reasons in the 50s.
K
Powerful! Let us remember the struggle so as not to slide back down the mountain to the valley of oppression.
Yes, shit happened, it still does but we have a bit more control, use it well. Good write,,,,
Gut wrenching to think it wasn't all that long ago ... great write, Mouse!
"Ya got no right!!!!" (You've seen "Frances", I'm assuming!)
Who defines what "crazy" is? In the 50's it was white heterosexual males. Goddess help everybody else.
Fantastic and chilling stuff, LM, and I love how you captured her voice and her defiance.
Oh this is good! Sadly, all too accurate. Great write, Lolamouse!
damn.
intense.
Listen to my late stage back alley abortion Groove
damn
Wow - raw and real and compelling! Powerful write.
Lola, mi amiga, your scream, you wailing is heard loud and clear with this one. Wow!
Great expression
Gracias
so painful, just as living through that would have been, well done
This is really good, I wish it was fiction though
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