“Poetry is the way we help give name to the nameless so it can be thought.” ― Audre Lorde

Friday, April 5, 2013

Prosthetic Conscience




Are you tired of feeling shame, guilt, and remorse?
Is your superego super annoying?
Are you letting your sense of responsibility 
keep you from doing what you really want to do?
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(they’re so round and perky they can be used as an emergency flotation device!)
and pioneered the medical and automotive service 
“Drive-Thru Facelift”
(get your face fixed and your car washed in one simple trip *)
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with its “thou shalts” and “thou shalt nots!”
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You can now have the appearance of a fully developed conscience
without the constant badgering and morality!
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and replace it with a new, state of the art 
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without the nagging burden of contrition 
that has always held you back!
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* waxing extra
** may involve excruciating pain
*** not actual surgeons but may use surgical instruments
**** Konstant Konscience contains no actual conscience
***** actual recovery times may be up to 2 years and may involve extensive physical rehabilitation
****** calls will be charged at the rate of $9.95/minute

submitted for d'Verse Poets Pub, Just Say What You Don't Mean, Irony 
and napowrimo, Day Four, in which we're prompted to write a poem using a spaceship name from the books of Scottish science fiction writer Iain M. Banks

12 comments:

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is brilliant, LM. I snorted, choked and shook my head in wonder. My, oh my, but I love a bit of satire with my biting sarcasm.

Claudia said...

haha...i'm glad you shared the smallprint with us as well...so good...laughed out loud a few times...loved it

kkkkaty said...

Very clever write on the irony of cosmetic surgery..

liv2write2day said...

Lola, this is priceless. I love the humor, the voice you used of an infomerical, just perfect. By the way, do you need my mailing address?

Brian Miller said...

ahahahaha flotation devices...ah you made me laugh out loud...i can hear this on late night tv surely...ugh...

rumoursofrhyme said...

Are you sure this is a spoof? I've seen adverts just like this.

Brilliant satire, had me laughing from start to small print :-)

Kay L. Davies said...

Too funny, Ms Mouse! I love it. Especially
"You can now have the appearance of a fully developed conscience without the constant badgering and morality!"
K

rowantaw.com said...

Funny and reminded me of the comics with ads for x-ray specs.

zongrik said...

satiric verses (as opposed to satanic verses) get it?? :)

First Rose

mindlovemisery said...

This is absolutely hilarious and more than a little scary at the same time!

Margaret said...

without the nagging burden of contrition
that has always held you back

and I LOVE the asterisks ... Awesome witty poem!

Marcoantonio Arellano said...

$9.97 a minute, hmmm? That's not too bad. I'm already imaginning myself in control of my consciousness.

*********Hmmm