Suffering is no more
Surrounded by much love
Soaring free from fetters
Suffused with a new hope
seen with eyes become clear
Such pain you have carried
Such strength lies in your grace
submitted for Sunday Mini Challenge, Pleiades Poem, at Imaginary Garden with Toads
10 comments:
A majestic Pleiades...♥
Lolamouse, what's up? the last couple of pieces I've read of yours seem to delve darken caverns of the least known. Is it a friend, a relative, oneself? I write much in this subject but in a philosophically curious sense, where is your impetus coming from? We, your peers, love you and support you.
Serenity indeed.. the strength to be found in individual grace. Thanks for trying out this tricky form.
nicely played to form...nice serenity found as well...
After reading that, I somehow feel lighter...
Pearl
A psalm of hope. Great stuff!
Who was it that said "I don't know much about art, but I know what I like!"?
Ditto for me.
Beautiful writing!
(On another note, check Poets United today.)
A beautiful tribute.
very beautiful thoughts expressed in just the right words in just the right form. so fitting for these sisters.
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