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Come to me, she beckons
dark curves seducing me back
to this place of ambivalence
Desire, destruction hopscotch across her body
She smiles
keys cracked and black stained
rotten teeth
meth mouth
gaping hole waiting to be filled
with my words
she mocks my impotence
I wave the white flag
submitted for Magpie Tales 89
13 comments:
Egads, lovie...........you MUST write! ;)
*hugs*
Mimi
What a captivating and brilliant take on the prompt...love this lolamouse....nibble on that!
:-)
wow...kind creepy...meth mouth itself is a scary image....i might wave the flag at that one...
oh the seduction, terrific Magpie
You are so talented at writing I only hope I can get half as good as you someday...I'm working hard on it! I have a ? if you don't mind. Under "My Bloggie Friends Give Me Awards" I'd appreaciate that you give me a link back to my site on "The Sunshine Award" I'm the only person that doesn't have one on your list. It would be a great help in bringing me some readers. At least it will get the horses to water, if they drink or not it's up to them. Lol! Hope your Halloween was good and keep up the wonderful writing! ♥
Wow, that was great Lola. Nice job.
It will come and the keys shall no longer be at rest.
The keyboard is an evil seductress. A vile evil black plastic harpy with her claws dug into my shoulders screeching "Write, you fool! Write!"
Excellent write! This is writer's block unblocked!
:-)
POWERFUL! Very good Lola...
oh wow - scary stuff...
:)
She smiles
keys cracked and black stained
Wow! You said it - good read.
Loved that zinger of a last line!
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