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| Winter by whooa |
The cold has slowed the noise of restless Fall
and hoarfrost coats the grass beneath our feet
From Autumn's warmth descends December's pall
The cold has slowed the noise of restless Fall
Eath's shoulders draped within a white prayer shawl
We contemplate another year complete
The cold has slowed the noise of restless Fall
and hoarfrost coats the grass beneath our feet.
submitted for Thursday Think Tank at Poets United
7 comments:
Beautiful! And makes me so glad I moved down south. Brrrrr.
Nice images of winter... you worked well with the repetitive lines evoking winter's coldness
nice...the repitition works really well with this and drives your point...everything does slow quite a bit...the horfrost those is really cool...
powerful winter piece.
Gah. Made me chilly just reading that. Sometimes I wish you weren't so good at imagery.
Beautiful! Loved the flow and rhythm of the words, thanks!
Reminds me of "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening," which is not a bad poem to be reminded of.
I really like "Eath's shoulders draped within a white prayer shawl" too.
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