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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen

Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Dirty Blues

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Why buy the cow
Come get the milk for free
Let's skip the seduction
And get straight to the deed
I'm ready and I'm willing
And I know what you need
So forget about her
And take a ride with me.

Games are for children
I don't wanna play
I saw you and I want you
Ain't no shades of gray
What we're doin' is wrong
Don't try to pretend
If you believe in God
Start making amends.

Why buy the loaf
Come get the slices for free
My mama always told me
That's no way to be
But mama's not around
And I don't plan to tease
So come over to me baby
Bring me to my knees.

submitted for One Shot Wednesday, Week 40 at One Stop Poetry
also for Thursday Poets Rally, Week 41

26 comments:

Matty said...

My oh my. This lady is on a mission.

Fireblossom said...

Whoa! Well, I never. At least not before I got kicked out of finishing school. ;-)

Reflections said...

Direct, evocative piece. Nicely shared.

Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) said...

Oh my gosh... wow, wow, wow... LOL, yeah, chicky, I have to say.. all up to mischief.. :P :P

nene said...

Babble babble brrrr
I think I knew her
I used to eat loaf by the slice
had it that way
once or twice

When she was around
I'd eat bread by the pound
wometimes i'd tear off the rapping
surprise her while she was napping

but I like homemade bread
slowly and gently caressing
the doe to knead
and oh, the waft when baking
would bring me to my knees

Did I tell you I love bread blues?

Eric 'Bubba' Alder said...

Honesty is the best policy. (LOL!)

I like it - sassy, strong and sexy!

Dave King said...

Chuckle, chuckle, chuckle! Love it.

M. A. S. said...

I like the point of view here. It's unusual fora woman to talk like this in a poem. And I really envy your rhyming ability.

Mrs. Hyde said...

Oooooo, nasty! Loving the hooker heels.

Olivia said...

Holy cattle.. lolss
that lols is only for my expression..

Your words are ... gasp! The overall presentation, rhymes and the words.. BOW!

Many Hugs for sharing this delightful piece of pie xox

Olivia said...

there the comment game started again- buuhuuhuu

so here's what I wrote.. your words were- GASP!
The overall composition, choice of words and rhymes couldn't be any more perfect.. BOW!!

Many Many Hugs for this beautiful one.. xoxox

Jingle said...

what a call.
well done.

tolbert said...

i like this! all these droppings in one setting and no one rats them out!

Templeton's fury said...

if only i was brave enough to say this to the stranger ive been dreaming over...

tasithoughts said...

Very well done!

JP

http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/04/07/lovers-we-are-now/

Andy said...

I'm with Mrs. Hyde...Naughty! Naughty!

Heather said...

Oh.
My.
God.
This poem knocked me out of my seat. It's so bold and that's what makes it so incredible. Not only that, but you managed to rhyme without making it sound sing-song. Wonderful job! Love it.

booguloo said...

You the dudette! smiles..

Bryan M. White said...

We used to sing a song just like this in Sunday School :)

mihirvatsa said...

Ha ha. Bold and smart!!! But yeah, the rhyming is great! :D

Lolamouse said...

nene: now I'm hungry for some fresh baked bread!

Bing (PinkLady) said...

wow you are amazing! no beating around the bush here... i just hope that's not my man you're talking to... lol!

http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/remembrance.html

lynnaima said...

me likey! my kinda woman!!! lol lol lol

http://www.lynnaima.wordpress.com/

dragonkatet said...

Whew! I bet the guys need a cold shower after this one! ;) Loved it!

Vinay said...

Olly got it right! HOLY CATTLE! :D you don't hang about do u? ;) well said!

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Scarlett said...

I abs Love how forthright this is......my roommate wud def Love this