But ended up looking the fool
Your lungs have turned black
Your clothes reek; you hack
Should have listened to those films at school!
You think that it's too hard to quit
You say you don't have enough grit
But try to take Skoal
through your neck with a hole
It sure ain't that easy to spit!
submitted for Lung Love Rhyme Contest at Rachel Hoyt's Rhyme Me A Smile
4 comments:
This is a very helpful piece with artistry of word in calling attention to a malady that requires every means of attention
Good piece, Mouse
Gracias mi amiga
ugh...ewww...but so nicely done mouse...yeah, not cool
Yeah yeah yeah......
Sheesh!
Ya rotten thing......!
These are awesome, Lolamouse! Thank you for participating in the contest. :) :)
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