You started off thinking it cool
But ended up looking the fool
Your lungs have turned black
Your clothes reek; you hack
Should have listened to those films at school!
You think that it's too hard to quit
You say you don't have enough grit
But try to take Skoal
through your neck with a hole
It sure ain't that easy to spit!
submitted for Lung Love Rhyme Contest at Rachel Hoyt's Rhyme Me A Smile