Three daring and headstrong young lasses
Failed to heed the advice of the masses
Who warned, "The ice is too thin!"
And so they fell in
Getting soaked from their hats to their asses!
submitted for Mag 49
Thanks to Jingle for the awards!
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Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. Leonard Cohen
19 comments:
And they would have taken some time to dry out!
You sure tell it like it is!! Fun...
haha! They didn't have asses back then. They weren't allowed.
ho, ho, ho ... this is too funny!
*snort!*
love it
Perfect! and how long it would be before this passes...
Heh. You'd think their petticoats would save them, eh? ;)
HAHAHA... this is really funny! Nicely done :)
Yay! Good one - I wish I'd written it myself! LOL
Heehee!! Good one, Mouse.
Getting soaked from their hats to their asses!
what a hit, love your take.
Happy Writing.
Thanks all for the happy comments! I needed some cheer this week : )
Nice piece and quite enjoyable
LOL...just what I needed...so funny!! I loved it, well crafted poem my friend. oxo
They must have had some stalwart menfolks to haul out those fifty pound soaking wet skirts. Nice and light hearted mag.
Ha Ha!! Nice one!
What hats,so far from their asses!Thanks for the laugh!
The best I've seen this week!
Very funny. Thanks!
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